I personally think it's a bit too tall. It takes up almost 1/3 of the screen. So, either get a viewport mod to change the rendered area of the game (so 1/3 of it's not hidded behind the textures) or condense. Focus/ToT could be flush with the top of the minimap. Moving down the buttons. If you make her bars that small, they will seem too small. Unless she has a big monitor. Also, think about whether she needs two chat frames up all the time. What about the cast bar? Pet frame and pet bar could be better integrated, as well.
But it's a good start.
